Are you running all of this on that single 850w PSU? If so, you might be overloading it, or at least the 5v rail, which is usually only good for 20-25amps or so. See this research by @uChiaFarmer. Might try adding another PSU and splitting the load between them.
Why don’t you buy a SAS Controller, a cable and a SAS Shelf instead of this mess.
Controller is like 10-20€ cable around 30-50€ and the empty enclosure will be around 150-200€
all from ebay.
This will give you Hot Plug connection to 24 drives per enclosure that can even be daisy chained up to 9 enclosures.
This looks like a hell to troubleshoot.